She said “I have moved on……. “
She smiled, but the pain flickered through the corner of her eyes…. I don’t know whether she cried or not, but I could perceive her heart ripped apart…..
In the sap green grass of her mind I knew ‘he’was the first crystal dew on the blades of the grass……
Her heart mingled with blood and tears wanted remove the picture of ‘his’ face…. But still behind that urge of hers she wanted to keep ‘him’to herself…….
Though her specks hid her beautiful large eyes,………………
……………..I could see those tears which she had shed…… Where ‘his’image could be sensed………..
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Dedicated to my beloved friend….. SREYA………..
I was felling same…. When I was
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Moving on from my local town… And my friend came up to drop me….
It is really heart touching…… Poem
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Well done elizarudolf…. Keep it up
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Thank you so so so so sooooooo much…… Shivam….. ππππ
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Deep and intense!
Nicely written!
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Thank u soooooo much…. πππ
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Awesome!
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Thank u… βΊ
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You’re Welcome
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Touching and beautiful. ππΌ
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Thanks buddy…you made my day π..you wrote this for me …
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πππππu r a great 4nd 4 me……. I hope u will always be there 4 me and encourage me 2 write poem….. πππππ
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Your words speaks ….which action even fails to perform …its a great experience to have you in my life
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Hi, Eliza! Your poem is beautiful. So heart-touching. I can feel the very emotions in this work.
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Thank u sooooo much…… βΊ
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Aw, that’s dear. Thank you!
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loving your posts !!
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ThanksππβΊ
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So moving
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thank u so much β€β€
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glad u liked it πππ
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