Behind the veil, a weary time ticks by…
During the season of mists, the western tide creeps up along the sand…
Too late to retreat,
I turn bloodless under the untrodden surges…
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elizarudolf 
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Hi I think this one is a real thinker. Correct me if I am wrong you worked with symbolism here western tides means external distractions and untrodden means with new desires to which she gives up. This is what I thought of this piece. The word selection was amazing and symbolic expressions were really on next level.
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Well u r very much aptly correct…😘😘😘
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Yes although I had to ask what was your motivation for this
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U had to ask me???
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I mean what made you write this poem
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My love for writing abstract expressions…❤❤❤❤
M crazy about writing abstract…😘😘😘
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Yeah I got that from your this post you did it pretty good too I mean I had to check meaning of two words but that made my vocabulary good too so everybody wins.
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And by the way you do know that I have nominated you for liebster award.
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Thank u sooooo much…😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘😘
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What ???
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Accidentally happened “?”.
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Ohhhhh I seeee…😋😋😋
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U r such a lovely follower of mine…
U took such pain to understand it…
Thank u sooooo much…😘😘😘😘
M glad u liked it…..😊😊😊😊
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Have to be honest with you poetry is kinda my addiction I love writing and appreciating it
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Love, love, love your poetry 😊 ❤❤❤
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Thank u sooo much sir..☺☺☺
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M glad u liked it..☺☺☺
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Deep!
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Thank u…☺☺☺
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M glad u liked it..😘😘😘
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Nice lines as always
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Thank y sooooo much….😘😘😘😘
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Wowwww..thanks for those emojis
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Yr welcome..☺
Goodnight😘😘😘😘😘
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Again thanks for emojis……..snehaaaaaaaaaaaa
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U r crazy bro…😇😇😇
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Don’t call me brooooo😭😭😭😭😭
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Oooooopppssss sooooorrrryyy….
Actually m always in the habit of calling all my friends who r boys as bro….it is a defense mechanism.. That would prevent them from proposing me…😊😊😊😊
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I know about you😈😈😈..Not only you..all girls are like that. Why soo defensive..???
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Will not tell u…😋😋😋
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Hmmm..you are afraid that we propose you..ok..have fun
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No no no…its not like that…😊😊
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Then???
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Then what??
U know m crazy dude…!!!😇😇😇
Gunight..😘😗
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Hmmm..crazy angel.good morning
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Yup gumorn…☺😘
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Good morning
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How many times do u wanna say that dude…😂😂😂
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Oh I forgot…
Thanks 4 calling me angel….😘😘😘
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Good evening..angel..say thanks again…
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😋😋😋😋😚
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Hmmmmmm
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Ita very embarrassing when pretty girls like you tie rakhi to boys
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Goooooooood morning..snnnnnnnneeeeehaaaa
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Yup , good morning dude…☺☺
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M happy u liked it…😊😊😊
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good……………
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Thank u sooo much..😊😊
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M glad u liked it…😘😘😘
U have now become my constant motivator…😘😘😘
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always
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Thank u once again…😘😘😘
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Loved it ❤❤
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Thank u soooo much…😇😇
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M glad u liked it..❤❤❤
And after a long time…
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😊😊
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Goodnight💓
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Goodnight dear 😘😊
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😘😘😘
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😘😘😘😘😘
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The images married to words…simply moving.
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Thank u…😊😊
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M happy u liked it that much…☺☺☺
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Deep and wonderful. Very nice 👌
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Thank u💙💗
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Not at all 👌
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😊😊😊
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M glad u liked it💝💝💝
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