Western tides

Behind the veil, a weary time ticks by…

During the season of mists, the western tide creeps up along the sand…

Too late to retreat, 

I turn bloodless under the untrodden surges…


71 thoughts on “Western tides

  1. Hi I think this one is a real thinker. Correct me if I am wrong you worked with symbolism here western tides means external distractions and untrodden means with new desires to which she gives up. This is what I thought of this piece. The word selection was amazing and symbolic expressions were really on next level.

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      1. Oooooopppssss sooooorrrryyy….
        Actually m always in the habit of calling all my friends who r boys as bro….it is a defense mechanism.. That would prevent them from proposing me…๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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