The water emanates eloquently…. The beams of light dance graciously on its chests…..
Bending down I heed the gurgling of the ripples…. like the way I used to hear his heartbeats keeping my ears on his bosom….
Sensing the soft flow I try to make them intermit their speed…but they flux through, in between my fingers…..
…..like the way I failed to resist him from making me a lone soul……
Beautiful comparison.. loved it π
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Thanks…ππ
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M glad u liked it…πππ
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My pleasure π
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Hey, Beautifully said Eliza!
DEEP, yet simply phrasedβ€β
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Thank u sooo much Akshay…πππ
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M glad u liked it…ππ
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Yeahh, you post some really great stuff!
Cheersβ€β
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Oh that’s a huge compliment 4 me…
Thank u once again…!!!ππππππ
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Pleasure’s all mine!β€β
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It makes want to go on a boat ride! π
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Well I think u couldn’t make out what my post wants to mean…
It’s a comparison dude…
Read it once again…u will b able to find…πππ
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Haha I totally feel you bro! πβ I guess it’s the choice of images that provoke them ride cravings!
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Yeah though i didnt mention this but it was indeed the images which diverted my feeble mind…πππ …. Your guess is 100% correct!! You understood the unsaid so easily….im pleasantly surprised!! πππ
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It’s because the images made me feel the exact same way! You see brother..
“Great introvert minds, definitely do think alike” πβ
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Wow…im so so amazed right now!! π And so happyyy!! ππ No greater joy for an introvert than finding matching frequencies!!! πππ
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Now can I interrupt a bit….
M sorry for the misunderstanding…ππππ
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Oh dont be dear!!! π It was awesome indeed!! Need more such posts … Which have so much depth and open-ended…i guess we hijacked your post here…π … Hehe..over to you now π
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Yes i got the comparison part…that was obvious and was already mentioned as part of the 1st comment on this post! … But it also made me want to feel the water flowing through my fingers…so i chose to go on that tangent π
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Oh I see…πππ
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Thanks Sifar…π
M glad u liked it…πππ
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Yes super liked!…a good thought to start the day with…..and as usual…the images which compliment your writings so well!!
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Oh thank u once again…ππ
That’s really a great compliment 4 me…π€ππ
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The comparison was bomb! Great post! I love precise writings soaked in endless meaning! π
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Oh that’s a huge compliment 4 me…πππ
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Thank u sooooo much..
M glad u liked it..πππ
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Pleasures all mine hun! π
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Beautiful words Eliza. Again so much said in so little space. I hope you have a good day xxxxxxx
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Thank u sooooo much ma’am…πππ
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It really means a lot…πππππ
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You are so welcome xxxxxx
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Beautiful. I loved it!
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Thank u …πππ
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M glad u liked it…πππ
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What beautiful comparison, I just loved it.
The most wonderful thing that I read on any blog today.
I am going to re blog this on my link. I hope you don’t mind.
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Thank u sooooo much..ππππ
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Nope there is nothing to mind…
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Oh, duh – not your work but rather Eliza’s – very nice work Eliza. Guess I didn’t snap til after I commented due to the one that you wrote the other day that blew my mind!
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Thank u sooooo much…πππ
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M glad u liked it…ππππ
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sutil delicado muy bueno
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Thanks..ππ
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It really means a lot..πππ
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Extremely beautiful way of putting it. Loved it, Eliza π
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Thank u so much…ππππ
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M glad u liked it…ππ
Goodnight…πππ
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It’s a pleasure, dear!! β
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More power to your pen β
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Thank u Aaqib…πππ
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Really π
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Reblogged this on Aesthetic Miradh and commented:
I read something wonderful today on this blog by Eliza Rudolf.
please try and visit this blog, it is lovely and you are not going to regret it. https://elizarudolf.wordpress.com/2017/04/16/squishy-deluges/
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How wonderful it isβ¦!!!β₯β₯
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Thanks Sonal..πππ
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M glad u liked it that much..ππππ
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Spellbinding… πππ one of your best..
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Oh thank u sooooo much…πππ
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It really means a lot…π€π€π€
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awesome.really wonderful.
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Thank u sooooo much…πππ
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M glad u liked it..πππ
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thanks for reply
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How is this created..beautiful..keep writing more
shreyans
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Thank u Shreyans…πππ
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glad u liked it…πππ
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I love your word play! The imagery it derives is fantastic!!! Hank you for sharing!
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Thank u..π€π€
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M glad u liked it..ππ
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Hello Eliza, first of all I would like to thank you for your visit and follow my blog!
You have a great blog with beautiful pictures and strong poetry.
I love the way you write down your feelings in a poetic way.
I would like to read more of your beautiful poetry.
Best regards, Heidi
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Thank u sooooo much..πππ
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M glad u liked the post..ππ
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Sure, I like the post and I look forward to your next post π π
Have a nice day!
Best regards, Heidi
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Thanks once again..π
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Reblogged this on O LADO ESCURO DA LUA.
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Not sure why, but I imagined someone drowning someone when I read this. Like it was like an ode to a lover that was being literally drowned by another. Iβm certain itβs just me, but thatβs how it hit me when I first read it. #intheairtonight
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Thanks..ππ
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M glad u liked it…πππ
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Nice photos eliza, love em’!
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Thank u sooooo much..πππππ
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M glad u liked it…π€π€π€
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Beautiful lines with amazin image.
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Lovely post..ππ
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Thank uβΊβΊβΊ
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M glad u liked it..πππ
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