Squishy deluges

The water emanates eloquently….                     The beams of light dance graciously on its chests…..

Bending down I heed the gurgling of the ripples…. like the way I used to hear his heartbeats keeping my ears on his bosom….

Sensing the soft flow I try to make them intermit their speed…but they flux through, in between my fingers…..

…..like the way I failed to resist him from making me a lone soul……


89 thoughts on “Squishy deluges

      1. Yeah though i didnt mention this but it was indeed the images which diverted my feeble mind…๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜ …. Your guess is 100% correct!! You understood the unsaid so easily….im pleasantly surprised!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ‘Œ

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      2. Wow…im so so amazed right now!! ๐Ÿ˜Š And so happyyy!! ๐Ÿ˜๐Ÿ˜‚ No greater joy for an introvert than finding matching frequencies!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

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      3. Oh dont be dear!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š It was awesome indeed!! Need more such posts … Which have so much depth and open-ended…i guess we hijacked your post here…๐Ÿ˜Ž … Hehe..over to you now ๐Ÿ˜Š

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  1. Yes i got the comparison part…that was obvious and was already mentioned as part of the 1st comment on this post! … But it also made me want to feel the water flowing through my fingers…so i chose to go on that tangent ๐Ÿ˜

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  2. Hello Eliza, first of all I would like to thank you for your visit and follow my blog!
    You have a great blog with beautiful pictures and strong poetry.
    I love the way you write down your feelings in a poetic way.
    I would like to read more of your beautiful poetry.
    Best regards, Heidi

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  3. Not sure why, but I imagined someone drowning someone when I read this. Like it was like an ode to a lover that was being literally drowned by another. Iโ€™m certain itโ€™s just me, but thatโ€™s how it hit me when I first read it. #intheairtonight

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