Sitting silently on the warm sand at the shore he fondles over her memories with a drooping spirit….
A heartless lass,
For whom he passionately dedicated his life….
For whom he spent sleepless nights….
For whom he weaved his dreams with the delicate strands of love that ‘forever is a long time, but i dont mind spending it with you’….
Today he regrets at the greatest mistake his life had clashed with….
Cause she was a ruthless curse that has rivuleted his life, leaving behind the sizzling singe from where the smoke of her memories torments and agonizes him till date……
Dedicated to my bestie, Swapnilπ
Hey! How have you been dear? It has been so long.
Well once again I loved reading this.:)
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Sorry … πππ
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Thank u devikadi… ππβ€π
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As always I enjoyed reading your post. Awesome. Btw where were you? You posted after a long time…
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I was nowhere… πππ
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Thank you soooo much ππππ
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Missed you xxxxxx
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Sorry maam…. πππ
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Your write up is lovely. Hope you are ok xxxx
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Thank you maam…
Yup m okayyyy… β€β€β€
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How was my write up maam??
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Unique use of ‘fondles’ but I like it. πβ€
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Thank you soooo much πππ
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M glad u liked it πππ
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ππ nice
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Thanks… πππ
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May I know y r u crying… π€π€
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Most lovely n sweet lines…
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Thank u sooo much β€β€β€
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M glar u liked it dat much πππππππππ
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Welcome. Dear!!
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Beautifully written
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Thank u sooo much… πππ
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Most welcome!π
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π most welcome π
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M so glad u liked it dat much πππ
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Yeah, thanks for sharing! π
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M glad πππ
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My pleasureπ
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Ohhh powerful! Tugs the heartstrings!
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Thank you soooo much β€β€β€
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M glad u liked it dat much… ππππ
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Break up happened!!
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Yup… And he is my bestie… β€
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Ohhh…boys suffer a lot
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What do u mean???
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Boys hearts are weak regarding relationships
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Oh I seeeeeeeπππππ
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Yeah..don’t always see..hearts break because of pretty girls like you
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Lollllπππππ
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Hmmm..dance baby
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GOOD morning
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Yup… πππ
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Anyways.. How was my write up???
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Good…
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What happened yaa
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Only good??? πππ
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What should I say..it’s a sad story about bestie..we should not say what a wonderful story
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How was my write up…
I mean how is d language and all…. πππ
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It’s like up and down..you used very easy words and again used high vocabulary..overall you expressed in a simple way..I love that line..about ” strands of love…”
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Thank you soooo much ππππππππππππ
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Dis was a beautiful comment indeed… β€β€β€
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OK..thanks for hearts..no more hearts..I may fall for you
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Lollllπππππ
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Really madam
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This post gave me shivers and made my heart hurt. Powerful emotions coming through the screen there.
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Yup I know… πππ
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Thank u…
M glad u liked it.. β€β€β€
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Most lovely bt having a touch of pain.
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Yup…
Thank you soooo much β€β€β€β€
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Most welcome.dear!!πππ
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sweet and beautiful ..
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Thank u sooooo much…. β€β€β€
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M glad u liked it… πππ
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So Sweet… β€οΈ keep sharing πͺπ
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Thank you sooooo much ππ
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M glad u liked it β€β€β€
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Sorry you had to go through this. Heartbreak is the worst kind. I know so. Harder to learn to say goodbye and be at peace with it. Stay strong! Garfield hugsπππΎπΎ
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Yup ik… And its actually about my bestie… Thanks anyway… ππ
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Oops! Hope your bestie is feeling heaps betterπ
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Yup… He is okayyyyyy nowwwwwβ€β€β€β€β€
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M glad u liked it ππ
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Ohhhh…. I m glad… π€ππ€π
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Its healed π
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Teddy… Bestie… β€β€β€β€
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Hope he’s fine now, just let him know everything will be alright in the end , if it’s not ok its not the end! πβ€
He’s blessed to have bestie like you
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I Like this piece. Thank you for following me I am following you to. (On here).
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very beautiful post Eliza.
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Thanksπππ
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M glad you liked itπππ
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lovely lines and so heartfelt!
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Thank u so much… Glad u liked it… πππ
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