I was entangled in the labyrinth of time…
Time proved to be the best giver when I first saw him…
And today, alienating myself from the world….
I try to amend the mistakes my heart, where now emptiness has superseded love, once committed….
His betrayals were like thunderbolts for me….
Which proved the brutal truth that, ‘time is the best killer’……
Shouldn’t tine be the best healer??? Lovely poem. 👍👍😊
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Yup bro time is also the best healer..but it hasn’t yet proved itself as the best healer in my life…so my poem ended as time is the best killer…
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Yup, just give time, some time..And keep hope friend, time has rescued many from huge pains, I am damn sure he will do the same for you.
Till then exploit your pain and keep on expressing yourself. 👍👍😊
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Thanka for the motivation…😊😊😊
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Thank you
M glad u liked it…😘😘😘
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It was one of your best work and my pleasure to read and appreciate it. 👍👍😊
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Thank u once again…😊😊😘
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Great words x
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Thank u maam…☺
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M happy u liked it..☺😊
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There are two ways..when you are sad..time kills you slowly..when you are happy you kill time fast
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Good good good…😗😗😗😗😗
Truth spoken…👏👏👏👏
M happy that after a long time u spoke sense….😊
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Whaaaaaaaaat???? Soo I am senseless😭😭😭
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No no no…
at times u speak non sense…😂
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Hmm..from this time I would be seen..no problem jokes nothing .I will be serious and intellect to discuss your lines with my utmost brain capacity
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😂😂😂
😁😁😁
😋😋😋
💜💛💚
😊☺😊
😘😘😘
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What are these..emotions..indeed mixed emotions
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Will not tell u…😋😋😋
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Why???? Is it a secret
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😁😀😁😀😁😀
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Nice one, dear Eliza 🙂
Wishing you all the best
Didi
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Thank you..😊😊😊
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M glad u liked it di…😊😊😊
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Heartfelt
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Thank u😘😘😘
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M glad u liked it☺☺☺
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Eliza, this is so beautiful
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Thanks Sahil..😘😘😘
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M glad u liked it…❤❤❤❤
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😊
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All it takes a second to lose something and an eternity to fill that second. No wonder we find ourselves stuck in that second, a labyrinth of spent time.
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Beautiful comment it was…❤❤❤
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Beautiful poem it was.
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Thank u once again…❤😙
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🙂
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Thank u…
M lad u liked it..😘😘😘
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You are welcome 🙂 Oh, have the same theme.
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😘😘😘😊☺
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*glad..
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I like that ☺
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Thank u…😊😊😊
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M glad u liked it…😘😘😘
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a beautiful presentation of words and images.
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Thank you ma’am…😊
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M glad u liked it…☺😊
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This took away my heart
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Thank u… 😁💛
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M glad u liked it… 💛💛💛
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💓💓💓
Tor level Tai alada as I always say
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Thanks bhai…😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄😄❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
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Love u sree…!!! 😘
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😘😘😘
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😆😆😆😆
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Exactly…time indeed is the best healer…. beautiful dear
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Thanks… 💚💛💜
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glad you liked it..😄😄😄
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Loved the way you ended.
My favorite read from your blog!
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Thanks…😄😄💛
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Glad u liked it dat much…😊😊😊😊
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Eliza The portrayal of angst is so vivid, so unique, a pathos of sublime rendition. Anand Bose from Kerala
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Thank you sir…😄
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M glad u liked it..😊
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And today, alienating myself from the world….
I try to amend the mistakes my heart, where now emptiness has superseded love, once committed….
Amazing 💓
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Thank u soooo much…💙💙💙
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M glad u liked it…❤❤❤
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what to say. amazing. i had to read thrice 😉 appreciated
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Thrice😮😮😮
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Really……… 🙂 🙂 🙂
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Thank u soooooo much
M glad u liked it❤❤❤
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🙂 pleasure ❤
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😄😄😄goodnight… ❤❤❤
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Hmmm. good morning 🙂
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Love the Schindler effect – blue on grey 🙂
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Thank u sir… 😊😊😊
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M glad u liked it… ☺☺☺
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Time is d killer..indeed
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Yup.. Its the giver, revealer, healer and killer… 🙂🙂🙂
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Right
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No dear!!time is d best healer.
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Yup I know… Have used it in d write up.. 😊😊😊
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Good…..😊😊😊😊😁
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Thank you 😊😊😊
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Welcome dear!!with love💕💕💕
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Hi ! Thanks for your visit and your following:-) This one you wrote reminds me of one of my favourite writers, Steve Erickson
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Oh I see…
Thank u so much…😊😊😊
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Lovely poem
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Thank u💗❤🔥
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