My aeons are ceasing, each and every second I am enlarging the bygone……..
My heart is still cadencing like the flame of an extinguishing candle which is slowly making itself proceed towards death…..
Emaciated of the swartness, I light the candle, which previously he used to lit everyday with his own hands….
But today, due to the absence of his hands the candle splutters even in the steady stillness, as I sit by the table straining hard to obviate it…….
Beautifully written…
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Thank u sooooo much…🙂🤗
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M glad u liked it..🙂🤗
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Great work.Can I know the meaning of swartness dear??
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thank u…🙂🤗
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Sweety,meaning of swartness please?:)
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I said u Devikadi😇
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Oh swartness means darkness…🙂🤗
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Well,I tried to look in and couldn’t find the related meaning.Now I could relate possibly.:)
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🤗🤗🤗🤗🤗😇😊
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Stay blessed.:)
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Thank u…🙂🤗☺
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M sooooo happy that u liked my post..😊😊😊😊
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Yes dear,sure.:)
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Beautiful!
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Thank u sooooo much…🙂🤗
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You’re welcome.
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Glad u liked it..🙂🤗
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Thanks. I’m glad you posted it.
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🙂🤗☺
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I adore poetry. I will digest your work. I’m happy we connected. Irv
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Thanks sir…🙂🤗
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M glad u liked my work..🙂🤗
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From where you manage all these deep and heavy words😍
Very well written..🤗
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Thank you…🙂🤗
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Most welcome🤗
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Well in short, if u provide me with a dictionary anywhere and at anytime I would sit with it all day…🙂🤗😇
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I can make that thing out..😊
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It has verbal texture. I like that.
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Oh thank u once again…🙂🤗😇
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The sharp sting of his absence
Is poignantly clear.. that she is gone from his heart
Yet his love lives on in her dreams…
This is mad verse, beautiful use of verbs.. 👍👏👏
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Thanks…🙂🤗
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U could xactly make out what I wanted the readers to feel…🤗🙂😚😙
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Haha, actually your lines were so expressive that I couldn’t resist. As I said before.. Beautiful verbs used. You
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Thank u once again…🙂🤗😚
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Pleasure dear.. 😊
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😚😙😋goodnight…😙
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Well what does this mean???
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Very well expressed…
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Thank u …🙂🤗
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M glad u adored it..🙂🤗
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Amazing lines…loved it.
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Thanks…🙂🤗
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I wonder in which of my post u have not commented…😇😇😇
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Well ur poems are too bloody brilliant to ignore… 🙂 🙂
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Thank u sooooo much…🙂🤗
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U r really my all time motivator…🙂🤗
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Thank you.. 🙂
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It was really beautiful.. Loved it😊😊
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Thank you…🙂🤗😚
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👌👌👌
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Thanks …😊😇
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