Swaying at the brink of extinction, I looked down fearlessly,
The water cracked and growled, roared and howled……..
The darkness of its waves made me remember of the days without him……
Occluding my eyes I bade a tearful adieu to to the world……
Down and down I abated…. Without any inclination to survive……
I fluttered and failed for breath…
My heart refrained from pulsating……
My lungs became inflated with water…..
As I sluggeredly vestiged into the vasty hall of death…..
ETA 💓💓💓
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Puro gg na!!!!
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Ha😍😍😍
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Tui bujhechilis na j Ami notun post korbo….
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Tor ei sobhab ta ato bod na…
Ato deri Kore reply dis kano????
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Are likhte lyadh lge cho
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Ki likhbi???
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Acha chobi gulo chorom na…😍😍😍
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Yeash
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Ki koros akhon???
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Ghuma bo
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Tui ki unmad???
Kota baj j tui 😴😴😴😴
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Ki ghum pache
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Ato ghumole hibernation a chole jabi to re…..😂😂😂
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😂😂😂😂
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Tor ar anish dar moddhe ki hoe6e…
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K Jane 😂
Kichu Ekta hoche
Chele ta puro GG 😍
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Ami akhon snan a jabo dude….
Akta gaan mone porlo…
Thande thande pani se nahana chahiaaaa….
Gana ae chahe na ae gana chahiaaaa….😂😂😂😂😂
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😂😂😂😂😂
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Bhalo na gaan ta…
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Janis dude akash in WordPress!!!!!!
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Anish dadu kemon ache???
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K Jane
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Mane???
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Ghuma bo
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Ki bapar brk up naki????
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Eki nana
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😰😰😰😰bacieche….
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Which language is this?
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Oh this is Bengali…🙂🤗
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Nicely penned ☺
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Thank u Rohit….
Though this will never happen in my life …😂😂😂😂
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That is one of the best thing about ur writing even though this will never happen then also u expressed it very beautifully 😉😉
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Oh thank u…
M completely flattered at this statement of yrs…🙂🤗🤗😚😙
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😀 😀 pleasure is mine madame 🙂
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🙂🤗😚😙
U r such a cute guy…🤗🤗🤗
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Suggestive poem!
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Thanks sir…
This was just an imaginative fiction…🙂🤗
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It’s beautiful 💖
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Thank u…
Though its just a fiction…🙂🤗😚
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A beautifully versed fiction 💖
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Thank u sooooo much….🙂🤗😚
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its beautiful
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Thank u ma’am…
Though its just a fiction… 🤗
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But wonderfully described😊
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Thanks…🙂🤗
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Beautiful
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Thanks …🙂🤗
Though its only an imaginative fiction…🙂🤗
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Darun.. 🙂
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Hey u r a Bengali????😮😮😮
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Tai to mone hoi..:) 🙂
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And thanks a lot…
U r my constant motivation…🙂🤗
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Ami r motivation… 🙂 🙂
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Y???
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Tumio Bengali, bah…nijer vasae ktha bolar mojai alada 🙂
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From Kolkata??
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Yah…
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Great..
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Dear Eliza,
Try to focus your thoughts on positive things. From positive thoughts, positive words and deeds will follow. Remember: you are never alone. God is always with you, in you. Try also not to look back when you had bad experiences, little attention or even littel love. Your Friend, or Father, or Brother is always with you. In Him you can put your sorrow and give all attachments to Him – He knows your heart and will understand you. We all have ups and downs in our life and it is the reaction also from past lives. Good deeds return with good deeds and bad deeds with bad deeds – its a law, karmic law. Leave everything beside what brings you down and keep your good thoughts in God, then light will come in your heart…
I wish you strength and courage, dear Eliza
Real trust in God can bring a big change in one’s life
Hugs from my heart
Didi
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Thank u sooooo much di…🙂🤗
But this is only a mere fiction…
An idea to which I have added some words…that’s all….😊
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I enjoyed your poem–it was beautifully written! Be encouraged to stay strong and positive…try your best to not go down that hole of depression❤️❤️❤️ Thinking of you warmly. ~Joe
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Thanks for those kind words…
But its only a mere fiction… 🤗🤗
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Yesssssss!!!!! Ok good!😊
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fiction? even fiction has threads of fact. or maybe it should be referred to as “ghosts” of facts.
strange how pain or suffering or the negatives of life find their way to ink and paper more often than happiness, sunshine and feelings of goodness. care to offer a “why?”
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Yes…u r correct…🙂🤗
But its a mere fiction…😪😪
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Beautiful piece of writing.. Nicely penned😊 loved it..
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Thanks….
U r my constant motivation..🙂🤗😇
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I am happy being a motivation to someone😊😊 btw I hope u r not going through what you wrote??
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No no no no no no no no….🤥
Its just a mere fiction…🙂🤗
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Thank God.. I am happy you are not going through it. But I think fiction also comes from things that goes on inside our mind..
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This is so well written! It.caprivates the reader and draws them in.
Great job! I was.glad.to.see that in the comments this was not about anything you would do! I worried there at first.
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Thank u sooooo much….
Goodnight…🤗☺😄
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Beautiful.
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Thanks…🙂🤗
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Most sady poem.good imazination of broken heart.wonderful dear eliza.💞milte hein dil yahaan milke bichudne ko;khilte hein gul yahaan khilke bikhrane ko..
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Thank u …
Amazing verses..😍.🙂🤗😇
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Welcome dear.
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Amar lekha gulo teo kichu bol😭
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Are kichui asche na to re…😥😥😥😥
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Open your eyes and seeeee
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Akhono nei…😟😟😟😟
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Master Chatterjee do one thing…
Follow one or two person from my blog and see whether they like yr posts or not…😐
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Ami onek bar check kore6i….
Kintu net result 0…😞😞😞😞
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Piece by piece u ur self have to join them, as the heart will soon become vacant, so try harder and pray more it will give u peace and blood to pump it up best of luck in these great posts
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Thank u sooooo much for such a beautiful comment…🙂🤗😊😄
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No my pleasure
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Superb written dear… very well described 👌🏼👌🏼
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Thank u sooooo much…🙂🤗
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Hello,
Pleasure to meet you and thank you for taking to visit my blog page and liking some of my post for support, I appreciate it and look forward to reading more of your blog post as well.
Shay-lon
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Thank u…🙂☺
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What a great post!
Wish you all the best in your endeavors! 🙂
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Thank you…🙂🤗😇
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You’re welcome!
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🤗🤗😇
Goodnight…🙂🤗😇☺
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Sweet dreams! 🙂
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This is incredible!
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Thank u…🙂🙂🙂
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M glad u liked it..🙂😄
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Amazing piece of writing!
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Thanks..😄😄
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M glad u liked it..😊😊
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