Down the surges of depression

Swaying at the brink of extinction, I looked down fearlessly,

The water cracked and growled, roared and howled……..

The darkness of its waves made me remember of the days without him……

Occluding my eyes I bade a tearful adieu to to the world……

  Down and down I abated….                                Without any inclination to survive……

 I fluttered and failed for breath…

My heart refrained from pulsating……

My lungs became inflated with water…..

As I sluggeredly vestiged into the vasty hall of death…..


102 thoughts on “Down the surges of depression

      1. Ami akhon snan a jabo dude….
        Akta gaan mone porlo…
        Thande thande pani se nahana chahiaaaa….
        Gana ae chahe na ae gana chahiaaaa….๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚๐Ÿ˜‚


  1. Dear Eliza,

    Try to focus your thoughts on positive things. From positive thoughts, positive words and deeds will follow. Remember: you are never alone. God is always with you, in you. Try also not to look back when you had bad experiences, little attention or even littel love. Your Friend, or Father, or Brother is always with you. In Him you can put your sorrow and give all attachments to Him – He knows your heart and will understand you. We all have ups and downs in our life and it is the reaction also from past lives. Good deeds return with good deeds and bad deeds with bad deeds – its a law, karmic law. Leave everything beside what brings you down and keep your good thoughts in God, then light will come in your heart…

    I wish you strength and courage, dear Eliza
    Real trust in God can bring a big change in one’s life
    Hugs from my heart

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  2. fiction? even fiction has threads of fact. or maybe it should be referred to as “ghosts” of facts.
    strange how pain or suffering or the negatives of life find their way to ink and paper more often than happiness, sunshine and feelings of goodness. care to offer a “why?”

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  3. Piece by piece u ur self have to join them, as the heart will soon become vacant, so try harder and pray more it will give u peace and blood to pump it up best of luck in these great posts

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  4. Hello,
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