The rhythm of a song plays at my ear from the headphone, I go out and sit on the railing of the balcony….
The moon inundates the city with its gleam, the exotic city apparently throbbs with an inexplicable anticipation….
The city was ingenuously conceived and the characterization of each single abode was so deft and matured that it kept me totally enthralled in its mystery…..
I kept on staring at the moon and got deeply absorbed in my own way…..
…..as if, in the foreboding stillness of the night I awaited keenly for his arrival from beyond the terrestrial horizon……
My jaw dropped to the floor! So much love and pain in thus short fiction. Brilliant
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Thanks a lot my friend…🙂🤗
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My pleasure 😊
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Best 😍
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Ei sotti bhalo hoe6e….🤔???
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Mithe Ami boli? 😒
Sotti vlo hyche pagla
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Amar next post ta tok nie …tor ager
Life thek ei notun lifer akta description…kintu ektu complex …inner meaning bhujte hobe…🙂🤗😇
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Seta kokhn dibi?
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Debo debo…ektu wait kor…🙂🤗😏🙄
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Okay 😘
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A6a akhon ki koros???🤔
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Ei to snan e Jai..Tui?
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Ami akhon khaite bosbo..😇😇tor snan korte kotokkhon lagbe???
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10min moton
Aj anish er Sathe dekha korte jaibo
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Kokhon???🤔🤔
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Bikale tuition er age
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Bujhla?
1mash hoitese amader
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Bujhlam aj ki 1month anniversary???
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Ha
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Kono gift kenos nai???👕👖👟
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Nana Oisb gift abar ki..Dekha debo dujn dujn k bus
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Akta dairy milk to hotei pare…🍫🍫🍫 ba ice cream…🍦🍦🍧
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Na re
Bond ta different
Amra ghuri hoy to Ekta Cha
N kothar modhei hariye jai
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Wow !!!!😮😮😮
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😊hmm re
Aladai bonding
Suppose Ami OK rain niye duto line likhechilm o reply tao sei context e sei style n pattern e dilo..
Khub spontaneous n truely amk bojhe
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God bless yr relationship dude…and I m sure dis will b life long lasting…🙂🤗🙄😏
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I don’t know
Koto din it will last
Koto din por I can accept him Mon theke puropuri
But yes akhn happy achi
I got a mate who really cares
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Are na na tikbe tikbe!! Dada ta bhalo…😇
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A6a ki kinbi ???
Thursday sure to???
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Ha sure
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Ki ki kinbi dude???
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Kaal kinbo Ami n amrita sob
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Ki re
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Kire kothai geli???
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Snan e jbo
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Ei amio tor sathe snan korbo..akdin amra dujone mile akta pukure neme heaby snan korbo aksathe….😊😊😊😀
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Ha 😍
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Ai sree tui kothai re???🤔🤔🤔
Pagol tagol hoe geli naki😂😂😂
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Ei mora Ami naki Tor Sathe Kotha bolchina ki j bolis
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Dear Eliza
Well done written from your heart 🙂
Also the photos are very nice. One thing perhaps for improvement (not to be seen as a criticism of mine): the second photo should have a higher resolution it then even improves the nice photo some more levels up.
All the best
Didi
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OK di l would look after the correction…🙂🤗
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I did new blog award post and nominated you. Check it out. xx
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Oh sure I would check it shortly…🙂🤗
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Beautiful!
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Thank you dude…🙂🤗
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You’re welcome dude.
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Wow 😍😍😘😘
Beautifully expressed in such a short fiction 😊😊
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Thank u soooo much akshit….☺🙂😚😚😚
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Yaa… The combination of music and a free night sky does that! Well written!
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Thank you soon much…🙂🤗
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Ur welcome dear…
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bfully written
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Thank u ma’am…🙂🤗
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Both anticipating and nostalgic…beautifully-written. I love the air of darkness and stillness of this piece 👍
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Thanks…I love creating a lovely atmosphere before writing the main plot…🙂🤗😚
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You’ve done it pretty well here. Good Job! 🙂👍
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Nice
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Thanks…🙂🤗☺
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