Dawn of the rising moon

The strong wind rushed through the trees and bustled about in the chimney,while the distant thunder threatened a storm…..

I try to rise up on my shivering feet,but fall on the cold floor…..

Endeavoring again,with the glass of wine in my hands,I blend myself to walk up to the mirror on the clumsy footsteps…..

On seeing myself, an immediate move shakes me from head to toes….

I hurtle the glass of wine at the mirror,the mirror breaks into pieces……

While turning,the floor being slippery with the wine,my feet collapsed, and I fell on the gawky fragmented glasses that were scattered allover the floor…..

I hollered in anger and frustration,

I cried in distress and agony ……

“I am a loser……                                                        I am betrayed ………                                                I accepted all your flaws, but still you left me…..why did I love you???????……………..        when you only meant to hurt me??????…..”

And blood oozed from the inflicted parts of my body…..my veins tore…..my rib cage shattered as I cried …….

I lied immovable on the floor, in a pool of blood…..                                                                       Its still poured outside…….

bidding the time ,to espy the dawn of the rising moon at the horizon of the sky,and once again in my life…….


22 thoughts on “Dawn of the rising moon

  1. My girl may be this is something for the first time you wrote related to you… Smiling can befooled every one but not your best friend’s eyes so don’t worry

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      1. I am and will be
        Bhai toke ki miss korchi re
        Idk 1month Ami ki krbo
        Keep on writing
        Every day ghum theke uthe first Tor blog khuli
        You are not my friend
        My priority ๐Ÿ˜˜

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      1. A hurted human can understand others hurtings.dear eliza.but we have no complained from pain because it learn to live self depending,love to universe , self confidence and creativity.bless u dear.

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  2. Dear friend,

    Lately I have written a poem about love:

    Two-sided love

    Love in duality
    Takes, demands

    Love in unity, oneness
    Gives, unselfishly

    Love in duality
    Separates, loses

    Love in unity, oneness
    Is universal, wins

    Love in duality
    Fires the mind

    Love in unity, oneness
    Is life, is soul

    Love in duality
    Is possessive, wordly

    Love in unity, oneness
    Is free, divine

    Love in duality
    Is unconsciousness

    Love in unity, oneness
    Is consciousness

    Duality is Maya
    Unity, oneness is God


    I know, it is a very hard time for person who has left the mutual house of love.Try not to stay with your attention too long in the past – it will only cause you more pain. Try to look forward into a better future.

    All good wishes

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    1. Oh my god….u have written a whole poem 4me….my friend, I m completely flattered….thanks 4understanding my pain….and also thanks 4the lovely poem….๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—๐Ÿค—โ˜บ๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—๐Ÿ˜—

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